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Diet Pepsi

actually it's a rondolet, a shortened form of rondeau, but not a seperate category in p.s.

Diet Pepsi
The last drink you afforded me
Diet Pepsi
A silver can, eyeball tempting -
Better than looking at your glee
Strangling me, last image seen
Diet Pepsi


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  1. Date: 5/8/2012 9:38:00 PM
    taking second looks at your writes Susan:) the taste to me is ummmm flat lol i tried but I just can't:)have yourself a goodnight..p.d.

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 9:52:00 AM
    Tried a couple of rondolet(s?) I'm not much on putting effort into writing forms, but it is interesting to see how the mind's eye responds to alternative structuring both as the writer and as the reader. Intriguing, this rondolet, and as much as I would like to know more (of your thoughts) I enjoy walking away from a poem with questions to ponder.

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 11:03:00 PM
    Susan, nice... enjoyed..pd

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 1:14:00 PM
    hmmm..Im not sure if I should buy you a Diet Pepsi or not Susan:) Its an interesting form,the Rondeau.And a very nice little poem to read this late Sunday evening over here.So...found any two headed trolls yet?hahaha:)) Answer to your comment:I felt like having two heads,and none of them working,lol