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Die Not My Prime

Dye in white wool of time : Sweet youth;die not my prime. Kayod5 Oct.12th,2014. Contest title: IN ITS ESSENCE.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/19/2014 11:58:00 AM

complex yet beautiful... I like the homo-rhyme!..thanks for making my contest a special one.. congrats!

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/19/2014 12:09:00 PM

Thank you Nette,it is nice to hear from you.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/17/2014 9:05:00 AM

Congrats on your great verse, Kayode! :-)

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/17/2014 11:44:00 AM

Thank you Teddy.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/16/2014 3:30:00 PM

A great one...congrats my friend...cheers

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/16/2014 8:48:00 PM

Thank you Tim,I am happy to hear from you.

David Mohn

Date: 10/15/2014 7:15:00 PM

Big congrats Kayode on your win

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/16/2014 8:46:00 PM

Thanks David.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/15/2014 1:46:00 PM

Like your reasoning, Kayode...unique take on this them. Congrats on your win. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/15/2014 2:01:00 PM

Immense thanks Paul.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/15/2014 11:49:00 AM

Very creative and clever write, Kayod5, congrats

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/15/2014 1:03:00 PM

Thank you Dr.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/15/2014 11:19:00 AM

Great write congratulations on your win.

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/15/2014 1:02:00 PM

Thank you Maurice.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2014 10:06:00 AM

excellent write :-) mmmm i love greying men:-) many congrats on your win

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/15/2014 1:01:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/15/2014 9:49:00 AM

Beautiful! Congratulations on your win Kayod 5

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/15/2014 1:00:00 PM

Thank you Brenda.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/12/2014 10:51:00 AM

I love this one, Yours make sense..some of those I read do not. BG

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 10/12/2014 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Barbara.