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Did Not Respond

Did Not Respond Suppose to my poems others did not respond Maybe I might have to wave my magic wand On those whose comments they did not send And perhaps in your ways may start to bend. According to a little of the recent latest scoop Requirements are must be in a certain group If a comment is what you wanted to receive Why all my poems would you give the heave? Many of you profound poets my poems read As if some food for fodder you need to feed Your very self and soul selfishly replenish From intimate start to end and finally finish. Startling my sleek poem much have been Will never see or read another like this again After further study and more minutes you wait You never read them after having to hesitate. So hay hay and what should you say Go ahead and send me a comment anyway. James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran and Poet

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/12/2015 9:50:00 AM

I'm here :~) I also wonder these facts. To my surprise it's ok cause at least they stop and took a peek like a little mouse in its peep hole then ran and hid; even though no thought to what to write. A 7 sir and thank you for your service and happy veterans day hugs eve

James Horn
Date: 7/12/2015 10:18:00 AM

It is strange. My most popular poem about golf has been read by over 1,000 people and I only received two comments about it. Jim Horn

Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts

Date: 7/12/2015 8:35:00 AM

I think we all have a bit of this concern in us. Make a lot of sense for sure Now that I have gotten back in I'll read more here.

James Horn
Date: 7/12/2015 10:16:00 AM

I just kind of wondered. Jim Horn

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/11/2015 4:12:00 PM

Hello Jim, A great and appropriate write given the whys and ways of the Poetry Soup audience. Your message is clear and defined. And so, here's my comment: I enjoyed this write here this evening very much -- and with this, I wish you a most wonderful weekend my friend and colleague!! Best Always, Gary (A "7" too!!)

James Horn
Date: 7/12/2015 6:50:00 AM

appreciate your comment. can't do caps though. wasp bit my left hand and id is all swelled up. jim horn