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Did I Do It Right?

I winged my way..... Through the night When you opened your heart.... Opening the vulnerable you.... Exposed too I saw nothing, but light The love opens too.... Did I do it right? Winging my way through the night When I offer all.... Will she take it all? Will I fall? This is how I feel The heart ,so full Full for you.... What can I do? but love you Did I do it right? I lie with you.... All through the night.... The love to spill, my heart, beginning to fill, fill with light To breathe you in.... The smell of your hair, takes me there How long is the night? How long can I stay? How long can I bear? I want you too.... Did I do it right?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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