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Diamonds In Your Eyes

I say your heart is golden, so precious Every part of your skin is quite luscious I have to say the best part’s evident Is found through your eyes, a diamond’s remnants Your brilliant qualities is shown throughout Each part of the day makes me want to shout Your eyes sparkle and dazzle all of me Makes a desire, I want you completely Feelings of love have never been so high Affection in all pores, so much I cry In real awe I treasure your tender eyes In disbelief, diamonds snatched from the skies Surely your eyes amaze me, this I trust Their brilliance succumbs me, fills me with lust Russell Sivey Form Couplet (Sonnet) Contest: A Diamond's Remnants Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle 1/8/2014

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Date: 1/17/2014 8:45:00 PM
Another wonderful romantic masterpiece Russell....congratulations on this great win....
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Date: 1/16/2014 12:01:00 PM
many congrats Russell xx
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:39:00 PM
Enjoyed the diamond's remnants and congratulations on the fine win, Russell
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Date: 1/14/2014 3:04:00 PM
- Congratulations Russell, on your beautiful poem in the contest: - "A Diamond's Remnants" Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/12/2014 4:33:00 PM
love this wonderful romantic write - have a great week : )
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Date: 1/11/2014 12:27:00 AM
great way to do diamonds in the eyes for the contest, Russell. Good luck with it.
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Date: 1/11/2014 12:14:00 AM
wonderful
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Date: 1/9/2014 6:47:00 PM
You did a magnificent job of making this piece sparkle down the line, russell.. this artfully done.. how amazing , my friennd!... my favorite: ' In real awe I treasure your tender eyes In disbelief, diamonds snatched from the skies..'.. huggs
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Date: 1/9/2014 5:18:00 AM
- This shines, Russell !!!! - And I love it!! - Good luck in the contest! - Have a enjoyable day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/9/2014 3:47:00 AM
What a nice, saucy poem. Well done, best of luck with the comp.
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Date: 1/9/2014 12:29:00 AM
oooh la la Russell !! I like this very much...Awesome ...Luv,Deb
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