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Diamonds forever sparkle deeply as a treasured jewel Dawning and revealing pure in a fresh breath of light Shining on warm gentle bonds inside one’s very heart Tears just beating drums with sounds splashing gently Young and beautiful as with a coldness of clouds above Golden shattering silver reflections in a most azure sky Falling rain inside believing in a dream of pure redemption Sadness looms heavy in a kingdom of one-eyed dwarfs Who live daily without hope, love, and surcease of sorrow Waterfalls down over a fountain of divine beauty in a land Of magical fairies imbued with supernatural powers of good Bringing healing to those afflicted and ignored by humans Everlasting happiness inside beauty cries joy and happiness For joy will skip in every single beat of a person’s heart and Happiness abounds with naked electric and alchemic powers And not to have love is completely devastating to one’s soul For without it men and women are robbed of happiness and Miss the rapture and joy coming from shared emotions pure Beauty and ugliness, hope and despair, joy and sadness Pervade the human endeavor in pairs of obvious dichotomy Reflecting warm and cold winds of continuous contradiction Dreams My Love are a way to play on the better nature of Our human psyche as we all seek to find calmer waterfalls With magical properties and reflections to make us all one Diamonds Forever My Love brings smiles and fulfillment in this World and in our personal world too with each of us struggling For meaning, love, hope, desire, and happiness here on Earth A new tomorrow rises from the ashes of the Phoenix as it again Takes its flight high in the sky making our imaginations soar in Finding those warm gentle bonds inside our hearts making us one Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (December 30, 2014) (Unrhymed Tercet)

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Date: 1/4/2015 12:20:00 PM
Liam Mate!! I've seen this one before!! Most excellent co-write here my dear friend. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 1/2/2015 4:00:00 AM
- I remember this with pleasure :) - Liam this is a really beautiful bouquet ..... diamonds last forever - love is beautiful - Happiness is like a candle - light it for others, it will fall glow back on yourself - A life without love, dreams, goals and hope, is a lonely life - a bouquet of all most important elements in life !!! - Love it from the beginning to end !!!!! - huggs // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/2/2015 9:07:00 AM
yeah so true anne lise diamonds always last forever the everlasting joy of something beautiful a great vision you paint in the candle thank you kindly dear friend bless you
Date: 1/1/2015 6:27:00 PM
you took me to an amazing fantasy world with you stunning imagery - great write as ever my friends - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/2/2015 9:02:00 AM
thank you jan for the wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you pal
Date: 1/1/2015 1:44:00 PM
Very beautiful pen here Liam and Gary! I really enjoyed reading this very powerful piece my dearest friends. You expressed it all very well and in a very positive manner and that sounds and looks just great to me. Wonderful sentiments about how to make the world a better place to live thru love peace and a lot of positive changes. Love the title it brings to my head that great James Bond movie! A very solid 7 +++ for each of you! Your pens are sparkling golden!I wish you again a very Happy New Year! Wish you all the best to you two. God bless you both in everything you do!:) As always you two are a great writing team. Smiling. Have a wonderful evening! Love and hugs! D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/2/2015 8:59:00 AM
thank you dorian for the very beautiful comment i am sure gary will agree bless you deeply appreciated

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