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Diamonds We all have so many diamonds that we own, but we think of them as glass or bits of stone. We often sell them as cheap pieces of junk, but yet always we think of them as unknown. The diamonds are the youth, your health, and no pain. Making love with your love, not much to complain. A thousand laughs, a thousand ways to enjoy, Getting old is the pain, no need to explain. My days are darken since my love, she is gone. The nightingales are calling me to hold on. The light is leaving me keeping me in dark. How much darkness there is, I’ll die before dawn. What if life is a bowl, in there, full of pain? The pain is there to drive you and me insane. Remember when we were young bursting with life? My face is wet, is it from tears or from rain? There are only a few days that you are young, on those days you believe that life is unsung. To be young is a dream no youth ever knows. No one is here to hear me what I have sung. If you are golden and like gold full of lust, Or maybe like the kings, you live and you must, You may have all the things all big and all small, At the end of the road, you will become dust. 8/2019 Haloo Note: This poem is in the form of "Rubaiyat", it is the plural form of Rubai. Rubai is a quatrain with the rhyming of AABA. Each Rubai is a book by itself, it starts and ends within the quatrain, but when it's in a form of Rubaiyat, it follows the single theme with the same meter throughout. Poetrysoup has a good explanation of this format. The painting is called " a reminder". It is acrylic on plywood.

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Date: 4/16/2020 11:32:00 PM
Again a wonderful write and deep one....a lot of pain in expressions too... Belated congratulations on POTD
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/9/2021 6:51:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 10/26/2019 9:25:00 PM
So wonderfully conceptualized and written - it deserves POTD! Congratulations, my friend! Well done! Hugs .Pandita
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/17/2019 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Pandita.
Date: 10/22/2019 7:11:00 AM
Very nice poem Pashang :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/17/2019 11:11:00 PM
Thank you Heidi...
Date: 10/8/2019 11:26:00 PM
Amazing poetry, love the concept,,,
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/17/2019 11:11:00 PM
Thank you Harry.
Date: 9/28/2019 6:20:00 AM
A beautiful Rubaiyat, well done indeed!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/17/2019 11:11:00 PM
Thanks Caren...
Date: 9/20/2019 12:21:00 PM
Your poetry is stunning, have a blessed day
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/17/2019 11:10:00 PM
You are so kind...
Date: 9/17/2019 8:01:00 AM
Back to read again and offer congratulations on POTD.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/17/2019 11:10:00 PM
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Date: 9/8/2019 12:58:00 AM
Hello pashang, this poem tells us of the factual truth of life - no matter how we are or were, only one thing is certain in life, and that is death. Congratulations on your so deserved POTD - a great honour paid to a very talented poet. Hugs, jennifer.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/17/2019 11:09:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/6/2019 2:14:00 PM
Hello Pashang Salehi, your poem speaks logic. I have enjoyed this poem. so nice to meet you. Have a nice day my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 11/17/2019 11:09:00 PM
Thank you dear.
Date: 9/5/2019 4:11:00 PM
There is much to ponder in your poem. But some, Pashang, some are only able to realize those diamonds with age. As long as there is love, I think, especially love from within, you will possess the greatest diamond of all... Love from without is the icing on the cake, and it is apparent you possess a great amount of that here <3
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/5/2019 7:40:00 PM
you are too kind, by the way, Hello there...
Date: 9/3/2019 10:05:00 AM
You do take your time to post new poems, Pashang, but once you do you dazzle with words of wisdom...true diamonds. Congratulations on POTD. Regards // paul
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/4/2019 12:25:00 AM
Thanks Paul, you know me so well...
Date: 9/3/2019 8:23:00 AM
Beautifully said, Pashang! Congratulations on POTD!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/4/2019 12:26:00 AM
Thanks Kim
Date: 9/2/2019 10:42:00 PM
Pleasant Rubaiyat this is Salehi Hemmed with polkas of philosophy Pain can't trouble old age too if We can love such Rubai photography
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/4/2019 12:27:00 AM
Thanks Probir
Date: 9/1/2019 4:03:00 PM
Never truer words said Pashang. Youth, health and love are true diamonds but so is the wisdom of age, I have one possession that, not even death can take from me, love. Love shall always be my diamond. You have so many dianmonds within you my friend. This write, in itself, comes from you, from wisdom gleaned through time. A wonderful write, Congratulations on your poem of the day. Have a wonderful Monday when it comes. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 4:15:00 PM
Thanks, Mike for being such a great friend... Once again thank you very much.
Date: 9/1/2019 11:40:00 AM
So much happy your poetry is highly appreciated and recognised! Congratulations, Pashang, on POTD honour! A well deserved acknowledgement.. warmest regards and blessings.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:20:00 PM
As long as my friends read my work is enough for me... You are always too kind to me. I am grateful...
Date: 9/1/2019 5:18:00 AM
- So true, Pashang ... "The diamonds are the youth, your health, and no pain" - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:18:00 PM
My dearest Anne Lisa, thanks for the kind words.
Date: 9/1/2019 2:45:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD... I like the write a lot...All the best Pashang
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Arturo, all the best back at you...
Date: 8/31/2019 9:37:00 PM
Pashang you are so good in this form of poetry, one I'm yet to try. A truly brilliant poem, so worthy of the POTD honor. Congratulations. I love your painting...Maria Hugs
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:17:00 PM
Hello Maria, my wonderful friend from down under... You are always so so so kind. So glad to hear from you. Pash
Date: 8/31/2019 8:02:00 PM
Excellent piem Panagiota
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thanks.
Date: 8/31/2019 2:06:00 PM
Terrific imagery and skill shown in this poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Best wishes, Jennifer.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Jennifer.
Date: 8/31/2019 1:27:00 PM
Diamonds are many moments in life. A "Smile" for example, is a treasure to hold. I really like this painting. Butterflies flutter about from the branches of this tree. Very inspiring indeed. Congratulations Pashang, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:14:00 PM
You are so kind... Thank you, dear.
Date: 8/31/2019 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Pashang
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:13:00 PM
You are so kind...
Date: 8/31/2019 10:48:00 AM
I guess we do sell our diamonds, and take them for granted. I see a kind of warning in your poem. The painting is so lovely, too. Congratulations!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:12:00 PM
You are so kind... Thank you, dear.
Date: 8/31/2019 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations. Enjoyed your POTD. Great job...........
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thanks dear.
Date: 8/31/2019 8:51:00 AM
really enjoyed this poem, many thanks for sharing, congrats on POTD :o) x
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2019 1:10:00 PM
Thank you my dear.
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