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I owe you, Cadbury iris of mine eyes From age to age you watched me aged Grace reminds, I'd see naught sans you gracing me Yet; two more eyes I possess, there's two of spirituality. Yes, I've grown from fire and ice, hurricanes, and sad groans They say, one day I just simmered; seemed more settled I who rose like dulcet scented rose in spring time When time served stews with parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme. My whole life I spent waiting; feeling trapped inside dark hole See, I lived near the Sea, but could not behold its quiet beauty At seventeen, one knight sought my hands, I smelled freedom that night As my spirit soared; but he was dismissed... my heart felt sore with pain. Dear to me was he. "You have eyes like a female deer." he said But mine eyes now sparkle like a rock... black girls also rock! * Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton Contest Name: "Wordplay Extravaganza" Date: 4/14/16

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Date: 4/12/2016 12:57:00 PM
Excellent write and wordplay, Iris! When young we often fail to see the beauty around us, mostly because our mind is taken up with other 'distractions'. Enjoyed the 'eyes' references in the final lines:) Regards // paul
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/12/2016 3:03:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. I am learning to filter distractions.
Date: 3/29/2016 6:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Iris :)
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Date: 3/30/2016 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Laura. Have a lovely day.
Date: 3/29/2016 3:06:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Iris..
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Date: 3/29/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank U dear one.
Date: 3/28/2016 7:36:00 PM
Very beautiful write and love the photo of my fav. lady, Iris, congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 3/29/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Eve. Somewhat surprise what became of it.
Date: 3/28/2016 1:58:00 PM
Beautifully written Iris congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thank U dear Jan. A bit surprise what became of it.
Date: 3/25/2016 8:07:00 PM
Deep and profound! An excellent entry for the contest, Iris.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/25/2016 10:24:00 PM
Happy Easter weekend, and thanks for visiting with your warmth.
Date: 3/20/2016 12:17:00 PM
Sometimes just identifying the problem is all one needs! Be blessed!
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:24:00 PM
U 2.
Date: 3/20/2016 12:09:00 PM
Very eloquent look into the past, the lessons learned and the resolution. Brilliant. Really nice Iris.
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:16:00 PM
Thank U Daniel. We'll c what become of it.

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