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Diamond Coat

One late fall morning I took my walk, and in the early morning sunlight. I saw that winter had visited, sometime in the middle of the night. A soft blanket of white did conceal, the dreariness of an autumn gone. It had replaced it with a jeweled coat, of a million diamonds upon my lawn. I stood there staring across the field, enjoying what nature had to give. I thanked God for all of the riches, that comes from this Ozark way to live.

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Date: 12/8/2023 2:38:00 PM
stunning and powerful poem, Jerry. I sincerely liked how you described winter as a 'jeweled coat, millions of diamonds upon you lawn.' Fabulous imagery. I liked the ending, for it spoked of gratitude for all the riches, (natural and manmade) Inspirational words...thanks for sharing your poetic voice, Sara
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/8/2023 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 12/8/2023 11:51:00 AM
How many of his favours can you deny? Always good to appreciate the blessings that surround us.. great poem my friend..
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/8/2023 7:21:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One. I appreciate you dropping by and leaving such a kind comment.
Date: 12/8/2023 10:31:00 AM
Awww Jerry that is just beautiful! It made me feel lovely….Debx
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/8/2023 7:22:00 PM
Thank you, Deb. Have a wonderful day my friend.
Date: 12/8/2023 9:59:00 AM
"It had replaced it with a jeweled coat, of a million diamonds upon my lawn" The imagery of a garden shrouded with diamonds, such a sight to see. I envy you, God gave that to you.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/8/2023 7:24:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. I believe we can find beauty in everything if we look hard enough.
Date: 12/8/2023 6:47:00 AM
Lovely Jerry, ‘a million diamonds upon my lawn’ what a wonderful image those words arouse… Poet pal Belle
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 12/8/2023 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. I appreciate the words of encouragement.

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