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A double Fibonnaci with one reversed Deep In Earth's depths A dazzling Surprise waits ages Formed by pressure, resplendent, bold A diamond emerges, symbol of strength this rock In the rough, it may appear unrefined but in its depths A radiance defined, luster Captures the sun's light Testament To its Great Change

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 2/4/2024 7:00:00 AM

Brilliant in its transitional contrast from dark depths to sun brilliancy. Congratulations Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2024 8:14:00 AM

Thank you, Frances. I appreciate the kind review plus congratulations. Sara k

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/22/2024 9:23:00 PM

Astounding work Sara! Its not as easy as i looks Sparkles with brilliance like the diamond! Pangie xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2024 12:59:00 AM

Panagiota, your visit is encouraging. Sara K

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/22/2024 5:57:00 PM

Oh this is beautiful, Sara! Indeed, your poem describes the formation of a diamond so poetically, and beautifully in its shape too. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2024 12:59:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. Don't we all need the warmth even if it is in wishes right about now. Sara K

David Fisher

Date: 1/22/2024 4:41:00 PM

Nice shaped poem, Sarah. You've turned a diamond of a poem into man and women's best friend. And congrats on the win!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2024 12:58:00 AM

So nice of you to drop by David. I appreciate you reading it and saying congratulations. Sara K

J. I. Thomas F.

Date: 1/22/2024 3:21:00 PM

Cool subject and interesting form. Congrats on the win!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2024 12:57:00 AM

Thank you J.I., for stopping by with congrats. Sara K

Jeanette Swan

Date: 1/22/2024 2:55:00 PM

Yes, it is such a contrast, the rock formed deep underground in unimaginable forces that can only dazzle in the light. What made people ever go looking there to find out that there were treasures?

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 3:11:00 PM

Jeanette, I think some investigation of the diamond might be good to see how it came to be. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 1/22/2024 7:01:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win in brians contest, well deserved and well done, always a pleasure seeing you in winners list. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 8:00:00 AM

Thank you, IE. I appreciate your visit with congrats. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/22/2024 6:03:00 AM

Quite imaginative, well-designed, and an excellent poem. Many congratulations on your win! Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 6:14:00 AM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/22/2024 2:48:00 AM

Well written poem in this diamond form poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 4:04:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. Your visits add a tasty morsel. Sara K

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/22/2024 1:17:00 AM

Congratulations Sarah on your premiere contest selection. Yours is a vastly superior shape poem based on scientific facts. Yet it the shape poem never sacrifices its literary soul Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 4:04:00 AM

Howard, I appreciate your visit to let me know that I placed in the contest. I will have to check it out. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2024 7:44:00 PM

Very nice! Hidden in the depths, the beauty of a diamond some of which one day will make a bride blush!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/22/2024 4:03:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Amazing what they are and what they can become just like people. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 1/21/2024 12:50:00 PM

I love the shape you’ve created with this creative write; and i love how both your fibs flow so well. You’ve described diamonds and their formation so well. I love how insightful and engaging this poem is: pleasure always reading your work dear sara. Hope weather is ok there now? I heard in california the weather seems stormy after ages. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/21/2024 2:07:00 PM

Thank you, IE. I appreciate the kind review of my work. The weather here in the south is cold, windy, but sunny for the last two days. We are warm and safe which is a good thing. Some are not so lucky due to many reasons. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/21/2024 12:09:00 PM

Very creative, you designed it really well and nice poem also..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/21/2024 12:32:00 PM

Thank you, SO. Glad you think it is nice. Sara K

Jan Allison

Date: 1/21/2024 10:50:00 AM

isn't mother nature absolutely amazing sara, this is a little gem of a poem:-) hugs Jan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/21/2024 12:32:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Jan. Yes, the earth is an amazing place with riches yet to be told. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/21/2024 8:50:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative "Diamond" write/shape/picture. Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/21/2024 9:23:00 AM

Why, thank you, Paula. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/21/2024 8:41:00 AM

oh, I just loved this...well executed shape poem, dear Sara K. You're right...diamonds are a great testament to the enduring power of change. Am faving this one because of its beautiful words. hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/21/2024 8:48:00 AM

Why, thank you, Sara B. I am honored that you faved it. Sara K