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We are drawn here for the festivity, to glorify His name. In our crimson best, presents wrapped gaily, to glorify His name. Joyous revelers and their dutiful handlers arriving. Doors open, we are welcomed heartily, to glorify His name. Presents not expected, but the mistress will not feel neglected. Material offerings stacked neatly, to glorify His name. The High Priestess, same outfit as daughter she wears, begins the Mass. Tailless donkey, fat clown smirks knowingly, to glorify His name. The sacrificial ham, its remains doused in mustard and served up In a Wonder Bread coffin festively, to glorify His name. Materialistic revelry, the presents torn asunder Young onlookers seethe deliriously, to glorify His Name. Priestess brings out decorated cake, pink frosting, five blazing flames Candles trace pentagram, implicitly, to glorify His name. Ice cream Bacchanaila, another unhinged Saturnalia Revelers sway intoxicatedly, to glorify His name. Sugar crash dysphoria, the merrymaking ends tearfully. Priestess signals the Mass’ ending quickly, to glorify His name. Thomas asks, with tremulous hesitation and no small dreading, Is Jimmy’s birthday party next Sunday, to glorify His name?
3/13/16 For the "Give me a Gazal" contest by Timothy Hicks

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Date: 8/4/2016 5:40:00 PM
Very nice....
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/5/2016 3:41:00 PM
You're very talented...
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Tom Quigley
Date: 8/4/2016 7:25:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/29/2016 4:54:00 PM
Hi Tom, Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/28/2016 1:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win:)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/28/2016 6:52:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/27/2016 11:58:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Tom
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/28/2016 6:54:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/27/2016 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations Tom This is very funny. Peace my friend:)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/28/2016 6:55:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel!
Date: 3/27/2016 9:32:00 AM
A well deserved number one ... Tom, congratulations on your top spot. Linda
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/28/2016 6:55:00 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Date: 3/27/2016 9:31:00 AM
Your artistic veins were bulging in this exercise, Tom. Congratulations on a great win!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/28/2016 6:55:00 AM
Thanks, Lin!
Date: 3/27/2016 8:41:00 AM
Very well penned Tom a fabulous take on the theme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/28/2016 6:56:00 AM
Thanks, Jan!
Date: 3/27/2016 8:00:00 AM
Tom, unique interpretation of the form. How strongly we hold to ritual in our lives.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/27/2016 8:12:00 AM
thank you, James!
Date: 3/27/2016 1:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your very impressive win and well deserved
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/27/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Brian!
Date: 3/26/2016 11:42:00 PM
Congrats on your First Place Win, Tom! Christmas has a rather dark history, with pentagrams, Saturnalia etc., you wrote this in a very intriguing fashion, and with your surprise couplet at the end, made it darkly amusing. Little Tommy has no clue what's going on. Also loved your "Wonder Bread coffin"... not many attempted writing a ghazal that exceeded 5 couplets, so extra props for you there. Brilliant and totally unique subject matter.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/27/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy! Pleasant surprise!!

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