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Devotion Poem, This Painting I Do

*** This Painting I Do *** (A Devotion Poem for Jim) It is my heart Painting your portrait Out over this paper After I caught your profile, When you weren’t looking, Casting your attention In another direction, While I blended in The colors of your chin, And you hadn’t known that I’d peeked over Your well-kept Walls of mystery, which Usually…no, always even I Do not cross…But Today the artist, I, Let my sight spy To set down the contour lines Of your portrait, which I promise when completed To then hide this artwork From the view of anyone else: Beneath a cross-hatched weave Of a thousand tiny strokes Of glittering beams of gold, And shining rays of silver, Stippled stars overall to consume You — silhouetted by all the light Of God’s gracing and My loving heart’s way Of seeing you. ——————————————————————————————— (C) sally young eslinger 12/10/2022 Thanks be to God… ——————————————————————————————— (C) sally young eslinger 12/10/2022 Thanks be to God…

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Date: 12/14/2022 2:12:00 AM
What an amazing gift, both as a poet with a gifted pen as well as an artist, that is wonderful :) Thank you for visiting my poem today, your words were so beautiful. You just cannot know how much your precious words of compassion touched me; you are a blessing <3
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Date: 12/11/2022 7:40:00 AM
Sally , This is so intimate and beautiful. I too am a painter. It has always been my first love. The details and emotions you have woven touch my heart . I love this devotional poem ! Hugs and blessings, Susan :)
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/11/2022 7:53:00 AM
Susan, your dear note of relating your own art/poetry to what you felt here has made me weep. You see, my husband will not let me “stare” at him long enough for me to do his portrait. This poem, then, IS my heart painting…if you go on FB check my pg my art is lots posted. At top is a yellow kid’s angel. I look forward to our sharing! Big Hugs!
Date: 12/10/2022 8:44:00 PM
Wow! Extraordinary writing! You paint with both brush and words. Exceptional poetry. Beautiful, heartfelt portrait. You get a Fav!
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/11/2022 8:13:00 AM
Joe, dear heart! The sketch in this poem describes the tale of my wish to paint Jim’s portrait IF he’d agree to it! I don’t even have a good photo to copy from! Your words are so supportive & touch me deeply. You & I share a very deep mutual respect. Thank you for your words & your Friendship …many blessings over you! sally
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Date: 12/11/2022 8:01:00 AM
Joe, dear heart! The sketch in this poem describes the tale of my wish to paint Jim’s portrait IF he’d agree to it! I don’t even have a good photo to copy from! Your words are so supportive & touch me deeply. You & I share a very deep mutual respect. Thank you for your words & your Friendship …many blessings over you! sally
Date: 12/10/2022 10:18:00 AM
Ah, spoken like a true artist dear Sally, your observation as as impeccable as this precious poem, Love this xo
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/11/2022 8:11:00 AM
Mystic Rose! I include your title to commend another who is not afraid of the designation “mystic.” I am blown away by this comment from YOU! I deeply thank you! Xoxoxo sally
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Date: 12/11/2022 8:06:00 AM
Mystic Rose! I include your title to commend another who is not afraid of the designation “mystic.” I am blown away by this comment from YOU! I deeply thank you! Xoxoxo sally
Date: 12/10/2022 6:02:00 AM
Sally, you've put a lot of thought and affection into your dedication. You're a poet at heart, with a pen that can compose beautiful, moving verse.
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Date: 12/11/2022 8:21:00 AM
Lasaad, thank you for such supportive words. I often think about the ways and how’s poetry lives in us. I gave it up for 35 years because I found its process SO painful. But 2019, I took it on again, now I transcribe it more than seek it & I keep hoping to improve. You are a very talented poet. Your words touch me! Bless you! sally
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Date: 12/11/2022 8:20:00 AM
Lasaad, thank you for such supportive words. I often think about the ways and how’s poetry lives in us. I gave it up for 35 years because I found its process SO painful. But 2019, I took it on again, now I transcribe it more than seek it & I keep hoping to improve. You are a very talented poet. Your words touch me! Bless you! sally
Date: 12/10/2022 5:21:00 AM
You have a mind of an artist and pen that writes heartfelt poetry. Much care and love in this devotion, Sally.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 12/11/2022 8:28:00 AM
Vijay, my poet friend. I thank you for coming by to read and your time you write such a supportive comment. With your own poetry being so excellent, so truly a holding of the depth of the art of Poetry, I am very touched! Blessings of continued inspiration to you! sally
Date: 12/9/2022 10:42:00 PM
If you can paint you have great talent. Jim would be proud to see your work. Lovely poem. Happy dreams.
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Date: 12/11/2022 8:38:00 AM
Hi, dear Victor! Well, not sure if Jim will see this poem haha I drew since always. Wrote first poems at 10. Studied ballet locally til at 17, when I was accepted to study at Met Opera School of Ballet NYC. stunk at playing flute. Couldn’t act but helped make the costumes. Taught ballet since 17 and writing since 18. Had to quit college cause they required swimming and calculus & I couldn’t do either haha. Hugs!

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