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Devoted, Choosing To Hold

*** Devoted, Choosing to Hold *** Engaged By your spirit; My heart to yours; my heart’s hoping ~ Choosing, Not that long after we met. Completely to embrace you. And you, Losing your heart to me, choosing To commit yourself to a “hand-full” (in terms of the creative personality as defined by experts**). You, from a southern town; a male; “ minister’s kid;” curious about outer-space; quiet; student; survivor; an admirable man; introvert, but socially generous and well-liked; an engineer; brother of five; fan of blues/jazz; witty; reader; hard-worker; compassionate; empathetic; politically/socially concerned; fond of cats; caregiver. And so, Beloved, I suspect you Took more Into your hands and heart ~ likely More than you could imagine, for I am nearly your opposite: female/ extrovert/ Christian mystic/ poet/ artist/ reader/ talkative/ teacher/ sibling of one/ survivor/ - former - former - politically/socially ballerina/ Cc 1970’s hippie concerned/ quick to sing but not always in tune/ now need 24/7 care due to physical illness/ quick to laugh/ easy to weep/ compassionate/ empathetic/ from densely urban north/ loves dogs. Devoted, Here, loving We live; sharing Our full hearts And this day, Into tomorrow, Giving thanks to Abba For blessings, and for Inspiring this love That holds us so Well together. —————————————————————————————————————— * notes — experts: Will Durant, Colin McGinn, Hildegard of Bingen, Richard Rohr, Fr. Thomas Merton, Rabbi Rami Shapiro, ,Makoto Fujtimmurgay ALSO!……when searching for the FORM for this poem, I looked for “experimental” or “avant-garde” but neither is on the list. . (c) sally young eslinger 10/10/22 Thanks be to God!

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Date: 10/12/2022 8:26:00 PM
So much to take in and process here, Sally. What a match-up! ~ Processing away, ker-chunk, ker-chunk...
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Date: 10/12/2022 3:56:00 PM
A beautiful story/poem of the love and devotion you clearly have for your husband… Belle
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Date: 10/11/2022 2:14:00 PM
Incredible original poem. Love is for better, for worse. Unfortunately many think marriage is just sex and leave if they are not ready to sacrifice their lives. I spent five years taking care oof my wife with dementia. I never regretted it.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 10/12/2022 5:34:00 PM
Victor, I spent my early yrs after high school in NYC & Chicago w/svante grade& experimental artists & writers, reading lots of J.Joyce, even have a hand -written note from Samuel Beckett. I’ve more experinpmental poetry, an “anti-s,s.” Posting after surgery. Thanks for sharing your story. You are a gifted, talented, good man indeed. xoxo
Date: 10/11/2022 1:41:00 PM
Quite a beautiful write, Sally! A good man stands by your side. I knew a lady who told me her story that when she became seriously ill her husband left her. God turned his blessings over to her parents who took care of her. May your health be restored. <3 Kim
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