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Devils Fog

where did you say you're from? south Dakota or freezing New York? I ain't got a dime to spare you, but I'll offer you a ride on my wagon. you better not be staying here long, have you heard the humours about the fog? thick as night on a bright sunny spot, mutilated cattles but not a single drop of blood! and then we have those ghostly shucks! for centuries these parts have no history of red eyes coyotes, and what about those eerie lights hovering at devils arc, too steep for any mortal man to climb and mess around. if you're new in these part of town, wait no more and get the hell out fast, no one here gonna take your word, even if you say you saw Elvis here! I'll be Damm if you live to see the next day, and now sunny what did you say your name was? my mommy used to warned me not to pick up strangers, she used to say they could be the red eye demons. why just last week my neighbour jimmy, got his neck snaped back like dried old sticks, and he's 6 foot 300 pound massive fellow! rumours had it that he pick up some stranger in these woods say I forgot to ask you something boy, just where are you heading to? oh shucks and what ill time to have, here comes those Damm thick fog now..... """"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" Gail Angel Doyle You're In A Horror Movie Contest

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Date: 9/3/2013 8:25:00 AM
Wow, this is so good. Stephen King would be proud of this one. Straight to my favorites with this one.
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/3/2013 4:42:00 PM
Richard that is honour for me! thank you to much
Date: 9/2/2013 7:19:00 PM
You are a fantastic writer... I shuddered at the thought of most of this. Pure entertainment and your talent is phenomenal :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/2/2013 8:57:00 PM
thanks for the promo Karen, it was fun to write. thou at that time i had no vision just playing along the lines. . . I thank Jesus for this gift.
Date: 8/31/2013 10:21:00 AM
a suspenseful write Danesh.....well penned
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/31/2013 8:29:00 PM
my humble thanks Joseph may
Date: 8/30/2013 7:14:00 PM
You sure hell do know how to entertain my friend. Great piece. Have a great weekend ahead.
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/31/2013 12:44:00 AM
same to you my friend M. M
Date: 8/29/2013 3:03:00 PM
Very good poem! Dark and disturbing,.... yet, I liked it :) Keep up the great work! Also, thank you so much for all of your visits to my work, and for all of your great comments. It really means a lot!
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/29/2013 4:17:00 PM
I enjoyed your company very much.thank you so much Kelly
Date: 8/29/2013 1:02:00 PM
Brrrr night-light tonight DM after this one!!! Good job this poem kept me interested indeed. It grabbed me from the first line and held me to the finish. Great work here! MC
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/29/2013 4:19:00 PM
ya! one of my personal favourite too thanks mc. . .

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