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Devils Blood

A tale of one mans rage: I listen to shattered voices and trembling fearful screams rattling my inner conscious corrupting once vibrant dreams A stream of words trapped inside left hidden for so long escape with a sudden fury in that moment I was wrong The alcohol in my system enhanced this primal rage smacking her down emotionally my actions very strange Its like I stepped outside myself watching this violence transpire I only wanted to talk but my actions did not inspire Physically I may have struck her but I honestly don't remember with the devils blood surging my veins intensifying my temper Now i'm filled with agony and torment for what i'd done now I must rise above it for my daughter and my son For TA: Dedicated to a wonder father who had finally reached his limit. After so long, and so much abuse, he SNAPPED... JP...........7/10/06

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/11/2010 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Jared. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:34:00 AM
Congrats Jared on having this poem selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. luv.. good luck in the next phase darlin' and this one is tops to me...
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:08:00 PM
A very compelling poem, Jared. Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/28/2010 10:29:00 PM
Oh wow, this poem tells it exactly as it is. Well written my favorite poet! Scarlett.
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Date: 3/10/2010 6:34:00 AM
this is a wonderful piece of art, very touching. i am truly amazed on how much i can relate.
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Date: 10/10/2009 11:24:00 AM
Things like that happen. Circumstances come together and a person does something totally out of character for them. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/21/2009 11:36:00 AM
I think you have quatrain here ....and there can be forgiveness but no excuse for violence against a physically weaker person. Light & Love
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Date: 8/22/2009 7:21:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/21/2009 6:27:00 PM
Sad reality of the ramifications of abuse. Powerful poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved feature this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/18/2009 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured Jared, excellent write my friend>>James
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Date: 8/18/2009 10:16:00 AM
DAS-J..... Thank you for such an awesome comment....... To give a little background into this tale for you and others that may read: My sister is the abused, My brother-n-law the abuser...But it is not what it seems, they both were abusive in their own way, my sister dishing out the majority... A scandalous, money hungry, heartless woman who doesn't care who she steps on to achieve lifes' pursuit of adultery.... TA.. Was a her pawn, TA, stood tall before CheckMate. Thank you for reading....:JP]
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Date: 8/18/2009 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations, Jared, on having your insightful poem featured this week. You have written on a topic with a two edged sword. Many abusers are extremely sorrowful afterward, but often professional help is needed to end the cruelty cycle. Way back when, there was a popular phrase, "The devil made me do it." I hope your friend stands up to that old drinking devil and lives a loving life. He and the abused may need professional help. HELP is NOT shame. Excellent write, my poet friend. DAS-J
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jared. Love Carol
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Date: 7/12/2009 5:25:00 PM
That was a tear jerker. It was intense.
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Date: 7/5/2009 2:29:00 PM
Wonderful flow in this write Jared, and sometimes thay snap>>James
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