Devil Sleeping In My Bed

There is a devil sleeping in my bed She takes my hand leads me down Lower levels beneath Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/8/2012 7:12:00 PM

well she is a she-devil Russell .. that last line says so much..luv.. temptation is inevitable .. enjoyed this wonderful write.. hope u had a lovely Easter day..

Jack Horne

Date: 4/8/2012 2:39:00 PM

lol, lucky you, mate

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/8/2012 11:33:00 AM

is she a witchy nightmare,russell... vivid display of mood and feel!.. rare piece that leaves me wanting for more.. dream on, whoo!..:) huggs!

Tracy Edwards

Date: 4/8/2012 7:52:00 AM

Nice Kimo Russ.. You gotta watch out for them she-devils :) lol xxx Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/8/2012 5:41:00 AM

Interesting work..I got a chuckle..I hope just a work and not really happening or at least that you would not call a woman in your bed a devil..Thanks for stopping by my acrostic..Your uplifting comments were so encouraging..Sara