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Devil Inside a Bottle

The Devil Inside A Bottle The devil inside the bottle, only kept laughing at me. As he saw how I got lost for a love that couldn't be. I just kept drinking and drinking. The devil kept looking at me. I told him and asked him to help me, so my love could come to me. The devil told me - you once had a chance and lost it. Your love now has someone else and you, only belong to me. I kept drinking and drinking hoping my love's face to see. I didn't realized what a fool my drinking had made out of me. All I could see was the devil inside the bottle, that kept laughing at me...
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/4/2015 8:11:00 PM
Rest in peace Lucille, your poetry was beautiful
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Date: 6/4/2015 11:35:00 AM
A deep, harrowing story your words sew..... Congrats for having it featured in PS home page!
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Date: 6/2/2015 11:14:00 PM
My dearest Lucy, RIP...
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Date: 7/28/2013 12:26:00 PM
Awesome Lucilla ;} thank you for directing me here. You have a fab day OK ;}
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Date: 9/26/2012 7:20:00 AM
beautiful concept.thanx for reading my stuff.
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Date: 3/26/2012 2:43:00 AM
A touching write on lost love. Keep it up.
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:39:00 PM
turn the other cheek
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Date: 3/7/2012 12:45:00 PM
You take the reader inside your heart. I have never been a drinker but have known many and what it does to them. the problem is they don't see what you have.
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Date: 2/27/2012 7:00:00 PM
the devil is in the bottle and can't get out cork the bottle and turn about
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