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Below is the poem entitled Detained which was written by poet Tim B. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Chained in place to stagnant stone core
Sapped and wisely chose to then bore
A deep cavernous pit, chastised 
Love and hate have thus baptised till
Freedom is released that's the deal!
Unseen eyes and hands of skill sleight
Traveler's weary and widowed right
Tight, greater bonds than 'mithril' ore!

Rest your head, sigh and then pine
Sweeter than heaven's twine;
Damnation divine serpent
Listen, kill them that were sent
Metaphorically raping 
The heartbeat lonely scraping
Skilled, yet devilish entwine

Serenade, angels song
Unaware mindless throng
Kiss up to get king down
Infinite light shall crown
Cherubs not locked outside
Pearly gates 'pray' for long

Bite the hand that fed
Fed the hand that bit,
Reserved the last seat
Casting off the robe;
Developed a globe

Diminish verse
To hex a curse
God will set right
With holy white light
This detention

Will not stand
Let him go
Rand I stand

With you
For you


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  1. Date: 1/23/2012 7:25:00 PM
    welcome to poetry soup!! don't let the hex get ya.

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 7:02:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative verse this eve..I am glad that I chose this one for one of the ones that I could read this day..I enjoy writing Diminished Hexaverse form..Getting the count right sometimes poses problems in being able to say what I want to say..Thanks for the uplifting review of my work..Sara