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Detaching

It's a sad night, when a warm light, Runs cold. In the moonlight, lovers do fight, I know. It's a hard sight. After midnight, It slows, When they fall right, Back to their lie, Of hope. It's a time bomb, Ticking to explode. Love can be strong, But it can be wrong, I know. It's a bleak scene, Watching daydreams, Vanish. Such a cold thing, When you're reaching, And miss. It's a dark day, When you can't say, You know, Why you still fight, For this sad life, There's no hope, No hope. It's a time bomb, Ticking to explode. Love can be strong, But it can be wrong, I know,  I know. There's a small place, When they embrace, That's cold. It's a heart string, That's detaching, So slow, But it shows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/13/2016 8:55:00 PM
Bo V., a wonderful poem... SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2016 2:43:00 PM
Dang, its good. :-) I like the flow of 'I know', especially.
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Bo Vigoren
Date: 1/9/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thank you very much!

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