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I see the world...it passes by, I sit and watch...and start to cry. I feel I'm in a bleacher seat, no longer with you do I compete. I use to smile and laugh, and sing, now I stare...my ears still ring. My thoughts they wander here...than there, I wonder if you even care? That I feel confused and often dazed, my memory sits in clouded haze. I sit and stare into your face, I feel like I'm in outer space. P.R.Deremer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/27/2015 5:29:00 PM
GOSH, SO HEART FELT. NICELY WRITTEN, PAM! TU
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Tu Tran
Date: 7/27/2015 6:51:00 PM
Sorry to hear about the injury. I pray that u recover from it already. God bless you, Pam. Tu
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Pam Deremer
Date: 7/27/2015 6:28:00 PM
This is one of the poems which was related to a brain injury that happen to me in a accident when I was working.

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