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Destructive Obliteration

Hacksaw… Obliteration within; Scream the shame--- Make it a nightmare: Walking zombie, Destroy imagination… Annihilated. Russell Sivey Entrant into Debbie Guzzi's "Something Different" contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2011 3:27:00 PM

Oh, it was that Sylvia person. Pay no attention. I personally prefer your other style but gosh, I see THIS kind of poetry here all the time. It's a very popular way to write apparently, but I just like your rhyming stuff better. MY different one was a parody of ee cummings (Just). I even left off capitalization (you should do that too here. haha) This little poem of yours actually is very likable!!(I offended someone by the comment I made with MY different poem. OH, well, I meant what I said and I stick to it!)Happy New Year!!

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/28/2011 10:17:00 PM

Sylvia has the nerve to talk. Your work is far better than any of her's. This is a good entry for Debbie's contest.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 12/28/2011 5:09:00 AM

double 7!

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 12/28/2011 5:08:00 AM

Russell, THIS MAKES PERFECT SENSE...I hope that person was joking. THIS is what POETRY MEANS, The more they hate...the more you evoked emotion. RAW ENERGY. Bravo! 7 and a Fave!