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Destruction of Love

My Heart is torn out, beats it's last and then no more, My love stands over me, as I lay on the floor. She did it, She Killed me, by leaving me a broken man, Assasinated by my Lover's hand. She once filled my heart with laughter and song, She once comforted and loved me all the day long. Only secretly cavorting, a plan to steal, To destroy, to rent out, all I could feel. It is torn out, beats it's last and then no more, My love stands over me, as I lay on the floor. She did it, She Killed me, by leaving me a broken man, Assasinated by my Lover's hand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 9:11:00 AM
lOVE THE TITLE, 'DESTRUCTION OF LOVE.' ALSO THANKS FOR THE COMMENT. I KNOW WOMEN ALWAYS GET ASSASINATED BY THEIR LOVER'S. IT IS NICE TO KNOW A MAN CAN BE HURT ALSO TO 'destroy.' I FOLLWED THE HANDS OF ALMOST BEING ASSASINATED. lol :) GET IT! THAN I JUST TURNED AROUND AND ASSASINATED HIM MY SELF. THANKS FOR EVERY THING*luv~SKAT
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Date: 10/7/2010 4:06:00 PM
Hi Sidney-I just love reading your poetry.It is so beautiful.Easy to read yet powerful, being so full of emotion.You have an ardent fan.Luv June.
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:32:00 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Sidney. Love, Carol
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