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Destiny's Ecstasy

You may find destiny's ecstasy, that you searched for all your days Cut free from your bonds of sorrow,and sadness burnt up in a blaze For when the ashes and fog arise,happiness reveals its ways The familiar face in the mirror, will be happy with your gaze To stay on course in life you must keep the right frame of mind Think not only of yourself but of the others you may find Look at yourself as a stranger that you've met for the very first time Notice the sadness,and sorrow that you keep hidden away inside Hard enough as it is, you've got to just pull yourself upright For some circumstances in daily life, are hard to see in light Sometimes you have to look into a mirror,and focus with all your might To see what you may find hidden within,takes so much more than sight
*Collab with Dan Kearley <3 Thanks for the opportunity, Dan! 8) Twas fun..*

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  1. Date: 12/25/2012 11:05:00 AM
    have not heard from you for a while how are you ok have a nice christmas and happy new year thankyou for your coments back here in new yer to read more of your work love davidscottxxx

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 11:41:00 AM
    Excellent collab! A great message here, enjoyed. -- Sean

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 10:07:00 AM
    A quick visit to your nice poem. - Wishing you a peaceful and happy Christmas! - / / I'm sending you a big Christmas hug!! Anne-Lise :) - / /

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 11:50:00 AM
    Be proud Laura for this piece. For it truely touched my heart. Not many poems do that but i connected with the struggle. You spoke to my inner being.poeticly. this makes it to my faves.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 11:55:00 PM
    Great write Laura. Loved reading it.

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 12:54:00 AM
    looking at yourself from a strangers point of view, now thats interesting.. & sounds like a great way to get to know yourself better..and finding out what fits you best. great poetry, Laura^_^ ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:17:00 PM
    A great message in this Laura and that Danny Boy is hard to resist is he not. The two of you dance so well together! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 6:38:00 AM
    I agree being mentaly strong takes a lot more effort love your poem thanks for comments on mine xx davidscott

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 3:24:00 AM
    wonderful collab, Laura, so inspiring and beautifull....

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:55:00 PM
    Thank (YOU) for the opportunity! Twas a delight I must say...<3 (o;

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/25/2012 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dawwwhhhh well. (; Thanks :D
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:52:00 PM
    Wonderful poem, Beautiful message, Excellent write.

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/25/2012 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:29:00 PM
    A beautifullyscrpted masterpiece with and a moving message. Wow! Thank you for sharing!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:28:00 PM
    Great collab with you and Danny! I especially liked that part of looking at yourself as a stranger...etc.Awesome job you two:-)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 1:53:00 PM
    You two write with one hand... so enjoyed your collab... hope to see more in the future.. Michael

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 1:53:00 PM
    Yes, it's gorgeous ..... thanks to you both! Wishing you a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)