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Destiny Or Choices

On that day, When life took its first breath, Was destiny formed? Was life responsible, For its own choices? Or numbered by the days, On which life lived Did age grow, With her own conscience? When lifestyle and choices, Came into play, When roads and pathways Were ventured, Mistakes and consequences, Inevitable, Do mistakes happen When life takes hold of freedom, Or life blame life For every problem! Wasn’t me! Life would say! Not me surely, Must be the act of God! He’s the one to blame not me, Does life detract, From every responsibility? Or admit that perhaps the choices That life made were wrong, Who does life smite When things go wrong? Life smite’s itself, Hold up its hands, And say’s “I did that, Choices that I made were my own” When life comes to an end, And looks back, What does destiny see? It only sees CHOICES!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2016 1:15:00 PM
Excellent. This is great and awesome. A definite 7
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/2/2016 4:16:00 PM
A late thank you Funom x
Date: 4/28/2016 12:11:00 AM
Wendy, well done on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 5/4/2016 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Poet xxxxx
Date: 4/26/2016 4:56:00 AM
Greetings Wendy. Congrats for your placement with this fine piece!!! ;-)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/26/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thank you Teddy x
Date: 4/23/2016 9:01:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome placement in the contest. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/24/2016 3:46:00 AM
Thank you BL xxxxxxx
Date: 4/20/2016 7:28:00 AM
Well, That's Life!!! Well done Wendy. I enjoyed this one immensely. Congrats on your placement in the contest
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/24/2016 3:47:00 AM
Thank you John xxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/20/2016 12:08:00 PM
thank you very much x John
Date: 4/19/2016 10:23:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Wendy..
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/20/2016 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Dr Sharma xxxx
Date: 4/19/2016 9:35:00 PM
Hi Wendy, Congrats on your win. That last couplet is awesome: "What does destiny see? It only sees CHOICES". Well done! Cheers, Brian
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/20/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Brian xxxxxx
Date: 4/19/2016 3:21:00 PM
Very powerful thoughts about destiny or choice, Wendy. I agree with the wisdom of your words. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! 7 ~ Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/23/2016 3:39:00 AM
Thank you Sandra for reading my poems xxxx
Date: 4/19/2016 2:50:00 PM
Hi Wendy, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed your take on the theme. An excellent write. A seven from me. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/19/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thank you mike xxxxx
Date: 4/19/2016 1:46:00 PM
Congratulations Wendy on the placement of the contest
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/19/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thank you it was very unexpected I only posted it late afternoon, thought I might wait a few weeks xxxxx thank you xxxx

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