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Destiny Or Choices

Destiny or Choices Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
My fate resides within my destination Am I to make my own decisions or am I just God’s creation? Karma drags me beneath my delicate fortune Am I just a simple being or someone important?
Eventually my future will come and pass on. Whenever that happens I will realize my purpose will shine through the universe so bright Venus will capture my essence. Choosing to be extraordinary will allow my providence to survive. I prefer options inside my circumstances. I believe my decree lays next to my choices and my choices lay next to my reality. Science and destiny co-exist. I have proof of that. I live in the present and will die eventually. My choices are contingent upon my beliefs and my beliefs are contingent upon the understanding of chances taken. I feel freedom to live how I wish, yet I anticipate the hereafter. Reasoning can seem smooth yet selections can seem complicated. This I know. I hold my fate in my heart and I carry my decisions in my intellect. These two things keep me alive and staying alive will bring me to a superb life after death.
Am I to make my own decisions or am I just God’s creation? I think sincere reasoning causes future liberation Am I just a simple being or someone important? I do wish to be prosperous at peace and concordant. My fate resides within my destination I choose to be righteous with dedication More blessed life lessons free of contortion Karma drags me beneath my delicate fortune Date Written: April 18, 2016

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Date: 4/20/2016 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on your great win my lovely frind. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/19/2016 10:23:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win Laura..
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/20/2016 8:19:00 AM
thank you Dr. Upma :)-luloo
Date: 4/19/2016 9:37:00 PM
Hi Laura, Congrats on your contest win with this well-crafted and thought-provoking write. Cheers, Brian
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/20/2016 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Brian..:)-luloo
Date: 4/19/2016 3:24:00 PM
Beautifully written, Laura, and so full of wisdom and deep thoughts on this theme. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/19/2016 4:20:00 PM
thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 4/19/2016 3:06:00 PM
fab great poem x congrats
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/19/2016 4:19:00 PM
thank you Wendy :)-luloo
Date: 4/19/2016 2:58:00 PM
Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent write as always. A deep look into the question "Destiny Or Choices." This write holds the attention from start to finish, it actually made me ask myself some questions. A seven for this creative write. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/19/2016 4:19:00 PM
awww thanks Mike! :)-luloo
Date: 4/19/2016 10:05:00 AM
Excellent poem read from you. i agree with you regarding destiny where karma is the way to build better. Beautifully done. Best of luck. Loved always, bl
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/19/2016 1:05:00 PM
thank you BL..:)-luloo

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