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Destiny Beat

Mesmerized by summers fire-breathing;
These wounded hearts barely beating,
Crescent moons align in shuddered dark;
Enlightenment gives the stinging mark,
Upon the brow that is deeply scowling;
Hand to her chin, then she's growling,
A victim unaware of summertime's rage;
He touches hell for hope of heavens sage,
Destitute, alone in summers lurid poem;
The wounded hearts still beat on,
Still beating, two beats per second;
Then down to one he reckoned,
At the stop sign,

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  1. Date: 6/16/2012 6:45:00 PM
    Summer's fire breathing isavery apt description of what we have here too. Ifind this full of dire descriptionsand lurid imagery Tim; and wished there were more to it. Once I get into a great poem, it need not stop!

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 12:14:00 PM
    very amusing tone in the poem, the imagery jst written to perfection. This write inspired the young poet in. I very much admire your style of writting my friend. Jst beautiful. *smiles* RON

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 11:22:00 AM
    What an intense and glorious write my friend! You sure have painted an image of grandiosity and magnificence! The emergence of this poem is greater than most poems that I have read! I really enjoyed this fabulous write Tim! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 3:30:00 AM
    Tim,this poem is awesome!!!I LOVE THE IMAGERY !!! Thanks SOOO MUCH FOR SHARING!!!

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 1:59:00 AM
    Beautiful poem Tim. - oxox Anne-Lise