Destiny

what is destiny is it all about the success or the Triumph underneath the adversity or the obstacles projected as we create our journey of life hypothetically we all succeed in some manner but fail in most So we glorify and we dell in the moment when we crossed the finish line but rarely restrategize our failures....

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John Newson

Date: 5/2/2018 7:44:00 AM

I'm not sure which John Newson this is, but just wanted to make clear that it isn't me. That was all. JFN

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2016 8:18:00 AM

Hey John :) - I welcome you to Poetry - Soup :) - Thank you for your first poem, I look forward to many, many more in the future :) - Have fun, meet many "poet" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2016 2:59:00 AM

John Newson, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sharay Newson

Date: 3/24/2016 9:51:00 PM

I think that this poem is full of many emotions. It capatured how i feel right now. You hit the nail on the head with this poem. Job well down

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/24/2016 9:49:00 PM

John, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@