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Destiny

The patterned rain falls from the deep blue sky Staining the ground with its unmistaken film The deafening sound of the icy shrill Is enough to make the heart weep But I stand within the shroud Loathing the enemy and envisioning the fire It remains within my reach The eternal flame of a lonely imagination

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/24/2015 5:30:00 PM
FINE FREE VERSE. Congrats on your win..
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:18:00 AM
AVERY, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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