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opposite attracts. . . blossom cool meets summer moon two become one fate
(c) Olive ELoisa 12:23 am June 06, 2014 CONTEST: A haiku with a theme and title, "Destiny" SPONSOR: LEONORA GALINTA placed 1st.. :D to God be the greatest glory.. :)

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Date: 11/28/2014 12:57:00 PM
Destiny indeed, and opposites attract, that is indeed, a matter of fact, James :)
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Date: 7/7/2014 1:12:00 PM
Kudos on your win, Olive !
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations. Nice seeing you on another winners' list.
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Date: 7/1/2014 5:24:00 PM
Cool :) grats on your win :) happy hugs :)
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Date: 7/1/2014 3:35:00 PM
very lovely!! congrats on your win! =))
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Date: 7/12/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thank you sweet Aiyah..:)
Date: 7/1/2014 1:26:00 PM
Lovely haiku my dear friend Olive ! Congrats on huge merited win !
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Date: 7/12/2014 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma..:) God bless you always..:)
Date: 7/1/2014 11:43:00 AM
Congratz for the win! You deserve it! Wishing you all the Best always! - Doris
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Date: 7/12/2014 4:31:00 PM
Thanks much..:) GBU too
Date: 7/1/2014 1:36:00 AM
Yes, opposite attracts in some cases, enjoyed the write, congrats on the win, Olive
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Date: 7/1/2014 3:22:00 AM
Yes very rare cases...
Date: 6/30/2014 9:47:00 PM
Olive, I see by your time stamp that this beautiful Haiku was written in real time. Nicely done, congrats on the win
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Date: 7/1/2014 3:22:00 AM
Thank you John..:)
Date: 6/30/2014 7:00:00 PM
Congrats you! Proud of you. BG
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 3:21:00 AM
Thank you Barbara Kudos as well..:)
Date: 6/30/2014 4:13:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Olive!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 3:20:00 AM
Thank yo Arlene..:)
Date: 6/30/2014 4:05:00 PM
Hi Olive, I extend a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your TOP win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/1/2014 3:19:00 AM
Thank you Pandita..:) such an honor ..:)
Date: 6/30/2014 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations Olive_eloi!!:) Dinner it will be...but I leave it up to you to choose the place! :) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/7/2014 1:20:00 PM
Yes how cooling that will be :D
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Date: 7/1/2014 5:03:00 AM
At the sea?...so it shall be! :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 3:18:00 AM
Thank you :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 3:17:00 AM
At the sea at the sea...!!!
Date: 6/30/2014 2:31:00 PM
Well done on your placing. Quite a sweet little poem and a lovely interpretation of Destiny.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 3:16:00 AM
Thanks much..:)
Date: 6/30/2014 11:55:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st PLACE!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 3:14:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise..:)
Date: 6/30/2014 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend, Olive for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/30/2014 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Leonora.. :) God bless you.. :)
Date: 6/9/2014 4:01:00 PM
any time
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Date: 6/9/2014 8:35:00 AM
Olive, love the meaning.. good luck in the contest..Linda
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 11:19:00 AM
Thanks much Linda...:)
Date: 6/8/2014 1:47:00 PM
- Beautiful haiku, dear Olive - Thank faithful reader of my poems - (I have not had time to "soup" this past week. - Have a nice Sunday :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 6:50:00 AM
your most welcome Anne LIse.. :) hugs and hugs.. we missed you here.. :)
Date: 6/7/2014 11:44:00 PM
Destiny dictates, I march back back to my past and Poe, loved this poem!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 5:36:00 PM
thanks for the love Arthur.. :D your future comments are appreciated.. :D
Date: 6/7/2014 9:42:00 PM
quite lovely imagery, dearie.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.. :) again a try.. :D
Date: 6/7/2014 2:15:00 PM
Love your haiku, Olive_eloi:) it has an oriental feel to it. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thanks Paul.. :) this was a quick thought.. :D
Date: 6/7/2014 6:18:00 AM
Very sensitive haiku creating az pleasing picture, Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram you comment is as well pleasing.. :)
Date: 6/7/2014 3:51:00 AM
Great haiku Olive ,, wud certainly do well ,, gl in contest !
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 6:09:00 PM
OH!!! i don't expect Dr. Upma as I did this in quickie way.. :D?
Date: 6/6/2014 9:49:00 PM
Wonderful haiku Olive...I like the 2nd line...best wishes
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/7/2014 6:12:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.. :) I really appreciate your wonderful comment.. :)

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