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Destiny

We are appointed a day to be born and a day to die In this journey called life When the good die young, we always ask "Why"? Many lives are filled with heartache and strife Is it destiny that some people die young In this journey called life Who becomes the hero, and who remains unsung Abiding both in joy and sorrow Is it destiny that some people die young No one can promise us tomorrow We take life one day at a time Abiding both in joy and sorrow Some are taken in their prime Some leave us too early, taken too soon We take life one day at a time We fade in and out like phases of the moon We are appointed a day to be born and a day to die Some leave us too early, taken too soon When the good die young we always ask "Why"? For Debbie's - Dying Young Contest - 5- 14- 13

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Date: 6/2/2013 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations on a fantastic win, Joseph! Great job! x Annalise
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Date: 6/1/2013 5:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/1/2013 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I just lost my 25 year old nephew to a motorcycle fatality and I will show your poem to my sister as I think it will help her to stop asking why. Thanks again and Congratulations on your win.......
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Joseph May
Date: 6/1/2013 12:58:00 PM
I am sorry to hear about your loss Judy....It is so difficult when someone so young passes on.... I hope through faith that you and your family are able to cope with this difficult situation...love
Date: 6/1/2013 3:40:00 AM
hi and congrats Andy love, well done xx
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Date: 5/31/2013 8:10:00 PM
Joseph, excellent form and tone, it is a very sad thing when the young die, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/31/2013 10:24:00 AM
So true and heartfelt Joseph. Congrats to you on your well deserved win. AO
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Date: 5/14/2013 5:23:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work today..It is always harder when one very young gets sick and dies..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara
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Joseph May
Date: 5/14/2013 7:40:00 PM
thank you Sara

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