Destiny

and yet the pain seems quite insane, this suffering that i see, will of God does all arrange, before i became just me, though suffering yet i be, 2 sow n reap this earth-bound destiny? re: FOR FEET TO RUN nette onclaud... Don

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David Williams

Date: 7/29/2012 2:31:00 AM

Don, forget the pain, grab a few tinnies mate..I like it..Dave

Cindy Cayton

Date: 7/28/2012 5:53:00 PM

very much what I needed to read at this moment. As John called me a "droid" for putting a passionate piece which I removed, so the ornerier part of me, gave it back to him. Then I saw your title, and thought, yes, Bubby will have some good words, and there your words were. Love you, Lu

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/28/2012 5:25:00 PM

What a wonderful piece here Don! I really enjoyed the creativity that you installed withing this write my friend! "Though suffering yet I be" oh yes, I do understand that statement, been there...done that! Great Work!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/28/2012 5:11:00 PM

enjoyed reading your work Don!! Take care. Is it winter there?? it is 102 degrees here in Georgia.

Don Johnson
Date: 7/29/2012 2:31:00 AM

2 degrees celcius here this morning, 2 dog in the bed weather just here downunder