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Destiny Our eyes met we were caught in each others gaze there was never a word spoken smiles we shared for days the only language we spoke were that of smiles and blushes..... Then before a single word was said we knew a different path lay ahead torn apart we were by fate, as anger grasped her we are separate now but our hearts stand as one yearning to see each other before each day is done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/12/2009 3:28:00 PM
very nice I like........................
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Date: 2/12/2009 11:57:00 PM
A grea love poem Maryam.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/12/2009 8:01:00 AM
Smile~"Hello Gifted & Precious Maryam!"~ What a lovely and well crafted write here dear~filled with passion, truth and tender hope~I love these types of writes~where happy endings, are still within the balance! And, again, you show your ability, as a very good writer~And I look forward to reading your heart-felt words. More!~"My Love Always To You & Yours Loves, John!"~"Have A Beautiful Day!:)
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Date: 2/11/2009 8:39:00 PM
Maryam, this is really wonderful. "were that of smiles and blushes" is a beautiful line but the whole poem is beautiful and the feelings are so well expressed! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/11/2009 5:25:00 AM
Your words create such clarity, allowing the reader to really understand this, relate to it, feel like it's he or she that is in this. Terrific effect with that and a marvelous write. Michael
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:20:00 PM
Nice free verse Maryam, powerful words in this one conveying a nice message...Raul
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:13:00 PM
Woah, great strong poem Maryam. One of your better ones I think, love always ~Jen~
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