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Destinations Unknown

Running full throttle and redlined on a one way track burning bridges before and behind bouncing dice roll in the air as the Rubicon flows standing on the thin red line going back was never an option a hot wind chases lines in the sand 12/7/2016

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Deborah Burch

Date: 12/7/2016 9:17:00 PM

I like this John. "Running full throttle and redlined...going back was never an option...hot wind chases lines in the sand". And all in between. Well done. Hugggs. Cap'n Deb

John Beam
Date: 12/8/2016 5:25:00 AM

Thank you, Deb Hugs to you too and have wonderful day.

Phil Capitano

Date: 12/7/2016 8:08:00 AM

Love that last line. Very nice John.

John Beam
Date: 12/7/2016 4:46:00 PM

Thanks, Phil. I liked that the best too.