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Destination Crematorium

Before the dawn Listening unfamiliar talk Through the buildings opposite Following the cluster of temples, Feelings on my thought mixing- Morning Prayer gong in peace: the bell. Living wood on a dying fire ask Did we know the truth of us? Emitting rays of east, Radiance on a river reflect As I reach to the bank. Early morning, Ongoing cremation And activities around Put forth in contrast a life. Where degrees of emotion along, Knowledge of life enlightened Observing transformation Into universal elements Flesh, that adjoins.

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Date: 8/15/2013 2:46:00 PM
Very touching and emotional poem! It also makes one realize where we are eventually going to end up. So, we should make the most out of life while we have it! Very well done! By the way, thank you for reading my poem "Ode To Autumn", and for your nice comments. I really appreciate it! I am posting a poem today titled, "If I Died Now". You might enjoy it. Regards, from the United States.
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Date: 8/12/2013 7:06:00 PM
Fantastic poem. Our ultimate destination.
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Hem Raj Bastola
Date: 8/15/2013 1:16:00 PM
Thank you very much.

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