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Destination

Still you are with your lamp of trust searching the gold coin. lost in darkness swept by coincidence still you are with your mast of hope sailing to the polestar lost in darkness swept by coincidence however anchor is waiting here or there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/12/2014 9:09:00 AM
Your optimistic angle is nice. I am too until I am lost in hope. Beautiful poem enjoyed. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Date: 1/11/2014 8:04:00 AM
Syam This is a very deep and insightful write. Makes the reader do some thinking about the meaning of these words. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Karma poem.
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Date: 1/5/2014 2:50:00 PM
"Coincidence"seems to be the way with me, Syam. Not quite ready to drop anchor just yet, even though the polestar, so I am told, is within reach. Love, daver
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Date: 12/12/2013 8:43:00 AM
Thats a lovely poem letting go...
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