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This poem is not based on a real life experience, but often what I do is I put myself in the shoes of someone who could have experienced this and I write from their perspective. This one is about a husband and wife, (and it's told from the husbands perspective). The wife clearly has some sort of chemical imbalance/paranoia going on and it starts to boil over and keep manifesting. It gets so bad she starts to question the only person she's ever been able to trust, and that really wears on both of them. The husband is trying to tell her that he is there for her and will support her no matter what. He is the best person she's ever met and she knows that but her paranoia gets a hold of her and makes her question that. This poem is him reminding her of what he's seen and how he's still here and that she's forgetting how much he loves her which he shows with words and actions. 

Roses and the world’s fading into black Every tear that falls from your eyes, I set a wish aside for you As I start to notice the color of roses growing brighter every year I watched you fade in a matter of seconds Nothing lasts forever but minutes can be fragile Time flies in such a creative fashion when it’s giving me nothing and everything all at once Solidarity but it leaves you ambivalent Looking for the anger displaced but it turns out your sitting in it Withered roses and everything all at once Turns out we’re all grasping at straws One inch from death at any minute Nothing lasts forever but seconds can be fragile Thorns and the world’s condescending Innocence created from the color that’s fading from how much you shine I couldn’t hurt you with my life on the line I think you’re forgetting how much I love you Pain returns in uncertain ways I think you’re forgetting how much I love you You’re a saint in my mind I can’t lie It’s fading away to the depths of my mind Roses and the world is fading Everything is darker from the way that you shine Everyone can see that regret is in your rear-view mirror, leaving a life of failed passions behind You know I think the world of you You’re simply forgetting how much I love you I couldn’t be more honest with a gun to my head I think you’re forgetting I could never hurt you It’s fading away to the depths of my mind I can’t lie You know you’re a saint in my eyes Everyone else is telling you lies I think you’re forgetting how much I love you Everyone else is telling you lies I think you’re forgetting how much I love you

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Date: 12/8/2023 12:37:00 PM
Sometimes love is not enough...expressed so deeply..
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