Desperate Hope
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Poetic Form: Sonnet/Enclosed Rhyme
Inspired: 2023 December 24
*2nd Place*
This or That, Vol 22
Contest Judged: 2024 January 10
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
Image: N/A
If there'd be a crawlspace big enough for
a mouse to fit through, it will be no worth
for measured do one pleasure of a dearth
will be a great loss to all concerned more
Findings of a soul well depth is of choice
to best contemplate the resolve pressing
the fleeting passage of time jams healing
trends insurmountable odds, less a voice
Quietude crunches, replace nervousness
and snaps a cranium continued grounds
tethering edges e'er relinquished sounds
of wakes are suitable bite less nerves us
Hope claims honorable desperate needs
results 'wish' that expectation succeeds.
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2023
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