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Desperate For Your Love

Can you not see my bones have been stripped bare I expose them willingly without a care My nerves are raw from all that I feel A pierce draws the pain to make sure this is real Even the red vines are ecstasy on my skin You have all of me, outside and within Any small portion I would happily take Just please look at me before I break

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/10/2012 1:50:00 PM
again another nice write great expression love your writing always david scott x
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Date: 9/9/2012 8:15:00 AM
touching poem erin
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Date: 9/7/2012 5:59:00 AM
Another weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Erin. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
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