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Desire

chains same as hungry snakes,they look body with left none straight but only crook dirt,mud and a filthy air rooms of no hope just despair light in my hand #why do anyone care to venture? heavy steps and gaze nothing less,no more #beware,thoughts erase wasted time and timid chair #remember,"don't come unless u wash hair!" women,her power mind stuck and rhythms of play #go slow...take your time,she say breathing,cracking and no shame only desired lust #all men are same pressed lids, crossed legs,sweated brow #anytime now...anytime now

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Date: 2/20/2016 11:36:00 PM
gupta, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 8:06:00 PM
Vaibhav :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 8/13/2014 8:37:00 AM
such a powerful verse, sometimes I wonder if the time will ever come when men and women worldwide are considered equals [ at the very least mentally!] Light & Love
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Vaibhav Gupta
Date: 8/28/2014 4:49:00 PM
thank you debbie.......it was a cry for escape,for some through pleasure but many works with 'what they got?', clear and face-staring pain.

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