Desire

Kiss me before you say goodbye tell me all the times you've said you loved me I got my hair down baby, wind blowing it madly I feel so alive I beg you please don't leave we are like sweet honey, honey forever we were meant to be kiss me madly, if this is the last time kiss me baby with passion, let me feel your breath upon my lips, amidst the sadness for one last time, make me tingle and shiver hold me just till morning light don't leave me in this state baby I just want to play I beg on my knees, can't you see mascara running down, smudge it with your hands, feel my tears, baby I'm dying, kiss me give me fire I promise you baby your every desire..

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Harry Horsman

Date: 12/30/2012 5:28:00 AM

this is a wonderful poem kerry, truly heartfelt, and excellent visual aspects.. happy new year to you...

Wayland Bunch

Date: 12/26/2012 5:45:00 PM

The type of desire that is almost desperation. True desire for sure, I enjoyed the poem. I can't rate, because I've been writing myself for a very short time.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/29/2012 12:57:00 AM

There's love waling out that door,,,,, don't ya hate it when that happens,,,,, good write thought,,,,,, here's to you having a blessed day Kerry ;}

Rockman Pritts

Date: 7/25/2012 10:14:00 PM

Ok Kerry. This sounds more like pleading than desire. There's nothing wrong with that. This was a well written poem and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Rockman. :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2012 2:46:00 AM

Ohhhh....so sweet and romantic....not goodbye.....I love you!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Erich Goller

Date: 7/22/2012 4:43:00 PM

Desire indeed,That's a lovely and romantic story poem. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich