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Deserving a Kiss

deserving a kiss surely mind becomes upset when one's cool heart miss gummy kiss of wife so sweet and so nice that warms invites deep sleeping Kiss's always of love hides in for loved one's pain it's a kind of bliss Dirty feeler's kiss may be anybody else better it's to miss "A Kiss is just a kiss" Poetry contest

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Date: 8/12/2013 4:06:00 PM
lovely BL the sensuality flows out Shadow x smiles
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Bl Devnath
Date: 8/14/2013 12:11:00 PM
Thanks a lot, loved always, bl
Date: 8/11/2013 1:14:00 PM
love them all BL., mostly i enjoyed the last one... dirty feelers... :-) always~ Linda
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Date: 8/12/2013 9:51:00 AM
Thanks........, for your nice comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 8/8/2013 4:52:00 PM
A kiss is sometimes all it takes and sometimes it can cause a problem. It all depends how it's done. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Bl Devnath
Date: 8/10/2013 10:21:00 AM
A lot of thanks to you my friend for your comment. Sorry for late. am busy now a days and hardly find time. Loved always, bl
Date: 8/2/2013 2:19:00 PM
i truly am a student of your wonderful poetry
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Bl Devnath
Date: 8/3/2013 1:29:00 PM
Hi! my sweet friend, you are always my master. Ha ha...., loved your inspiration. Always, bl
Date: 7/30/2013 10:54:00 AM
ohhhh, the many laguages of a kiss done in a most unique way... well, well, i like the gummy one best, bl.. terrific!..) huggs
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/30/2013 10:15:00 PM
Many thanks for your nice comment. Loved always, bl.
Date: 7/26/2013 12:30:00 AM
I really liked that last one. Yes, it's better to miss that one!!
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/26/2013 9:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot for your comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/25/2013 3:29:00 PM
- Your "suggestion" is a good choice! - Good luck in the contest my friend bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/25/2013 4:42:00 PM
Many thanks for your comment and for wishing me good luck. Loved always, bl
Date: 7/25/2013 10:35:00 AM
Interesting way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Bl Devnath
Date: 7/25/2013 11:14:00 AM
A lot of thanks from my heart, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

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