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Deserted

Her children are still at rest . through the frosty window beholds the mother the feeble rays of the waning sun. Taken aback by the hovering clouds as her daily chores remain undone. Yet another day of futility Equations lack parity and remorse fills the rift a life with bargained voices constantly feeds the flesh and insanity veils the wounds. This gaol seems a heaven now and all the sinister chores rejoice within the door is locked and once again it resounds with the same nocturnal hymn

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Date: 1/13/2011 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Bishnu. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2010 4:21:00 AM
Well expressed thoughts well penned, bishnu
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Date: 8/26/2010 3:18:00 AM
Excellent piece, the poem reads as if it were a song. Bringing beautiful melodies to the ear.
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