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Desert Sunset

I sit in the warm sand and watch as the sun slides down the sky. From bright to dark, stark to muted, bleached, coloured, black. The dark shadows marched across the beautiful landscape to destinations unknown. The fierce glaring sun touches and finally slips below the horizon, and the world changes gear. For in the inky pools, there is movement; The furtive rustling of small creatures all around. The burning daylight heat dissipates while the air smells hot. The stars twinkle above, the cooling night breeze sweeps passed with a calming whisper, and a scorpion scuttles noiselessly by my outstretched leg. The night-time world is alive. Now, the sacred land is owned by the new crew until the morning sun signals the slow reversal.

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Date: 2/2/2024 11:00:00 AM
"I sit in the warm sand" offers a captivating exploration of the transition from day to night, inviting readers to immerse themselves in the sensory richness of the natural world and reflect on the cyclical patterns of existence. Nicely done..
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Mark Brown
Date: 2/3/2024 12:31:00 PM
Thank you so much for your feedback. It means a lot to me that you understand the meaning!
Date: 2/2/2024 7:35:00 AM
Dear Mark, your poetic pen captures the desert sunset with blissful finesse. Beautiful imagery of the burning day's transition through twilight to night, and the nightlife that stirs in the cool shadow of darkness. Wonderful contrasts. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Mark Brown
Date: 2/2/2024 8:05:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words! I'm trying to extend my creative writing a bit. Your encouragement means a lot to me!

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