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Desert Story

Stones inadvertently resemble pain sharp when raw freshly torn from rock. Witnesses of time, they fill with voices the ridges round off, become children's cheeks. Afterwards they shrink, stone egg cells in an eternity of ideas.

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Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 2:35:00 PM

Camelia, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ..SKAT

Camelia Radu
Date: 11/30/2018 11:51:00 AM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2013 2:31:00 PM

and I see a congrats is in order too!!! awesome.

Camelia Radu
Date: 3/6/2013 11:07:00 PM

Andrea, thanks! sometimes fewer words say more .. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2013 2:30:00 PM

wow, some profound words in this succinct poetry. I enjoyed this!

Camelia Radu
Date: 3/6/2013 11:09:00 PM

thanks!!! I'm happy you like it.

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/6/2013 10:55:00 AM

Very unique. Congratulations on the win.

Camelia Radu
Date: 3/6/2013 11:04:00 PM

Thank you very much for your message.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2013 9:36:00 PM

Camelia, congratulations with your awesome poem...LINDA

Camelia Radu
Date: 3/5/2013 10:45:00 PM

Thanks, PD, I'm honored that assessment. I won? i'M overwhelmed ... :)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/5/2013 4:38:00 PM

Congrats, Camelia. Excellent. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Camelia Radu
Date: 3/5/2013 10:42:00 PM

Thanks, Ralph, is something new for me, I hope I manage to translate some poems, I'm glad you like what I wrote!

Len Gasun

Date: 3/5/2013 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Camelia! A great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! love/hugs, Leonora

Camelia Radu
Date: 3/5/2013 10:40:00 PM

I do not believe it yet!!!!!! I'm really very happy, thank you very much, Leonora!!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/5/2013 1:21:00 AM

Congrats on your win Camelia xx

Camelia Radu
Date: 3/5/2013 10:38:00 PM

Thanks, Mandy, it's a wonderful surprise!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/19/2012 8:03:00 AM

Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Camelia. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week so please post some more. Love, Carol XXXX

Camelia Radu
Date: 3/5/2013 10:37:00 PM

good morning!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the encouragement, for reading, for the wishes! I will post more poems :)

Camelia Radu

Date: 10/19/2012 3:39:00 AM

Tobey, thanks for having stopped on my lyrics and I'm glad for your appreciation. I hope you manage to surprise you one day. :)

Camelia Radu

Date: 10/19/2012 3:37:00 AM

Vicky dear, thanks for your comment. It is a great honor to see that my message was so well perceived. My meeting with Omani desert was very strong and I am very happy if I managed to play this extreme experience and strong feelings triggered.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/19/2012 2:52:00 AM

I love the wisdom that shines through in this poem. Likening pain to stones -genius. It reminds us that no matter how accute the pain, just as stones disintergrate so does pain dissipate. Wonderful write Camelia!

Camelia Radu
Date: 11/30/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thank you

Tobey Hill

Date: 7/26/2012 2:04:00 PM

nicely done..Welcome to PS...TAH