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Describing My Angel

Nothing is as beautiful as watching the sun set in its splendor and radiance. Nothing is so natural as watching the nature blossom in its peacefulness. The birds singing in their sonorous voices. The trees and plants blowing their bugles and trumpets and flutes. The ocean flowing in its stillness and coolness, making a harmonious melody to the soul. Nothing is as sacred as a secret, bounding together for the fear of betrayal. Nothing is as adorable as a treasure. All this put together would not be able to quantify what it means to express what you have been to my life and world. Oh! Behold my beautiful maiden, lonely on the hills of melancholy and with her sonorous voice she sings chanting for a missing Adonis. In you I have found peace, joy and happiness. A treasure I have found in you and that means more than the world to me. This, I have longed for, and this I have found,you! Like the snail I was, I withdrew to my shell and said i would not come out again from my shell but the first rain of the new season has sent my snail out again roaming its tentacles in the coolness of the fresh air. The beauty that others couldn't find on her face, I have found in her heart. That was why they couldn't find the treasure that i have found in her. They call her princess but i call her a queen. They call her a friend, I call her a companion. They call her a woman, I call her a mother. They call her a girl but i call her a wife. They said she is weak, but in her i have found my strength. In her I have built a beautiful world where only the two of us would live comfortably without the disturbance or interference of this wicked world. I would live comfortably in this world i have built with you forever if you wont kick me out because without you, this world all put together is meaningless and vague to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/29/2010 12:36:00 PM
This poem goes to my favorites..indeed a gem,lucky lady indeed to be praised this way..Charma
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Date: 1/28/2010 6:18:00 AM
This describes a very lucky woman in my opinion. To have one that cares so deeply and feels so passionately for them is amazing. A beautiful dedication to a loved one. Smiles from Lolita
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