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Describing Change

The black moving night,a covering shawl Circles the world before the golden dawn While we underneath are always in awe, of the changes in light we look upon Beautiful colors appear from this change And enter the eye of the artist's mind As pages are filled, decriptions exchange Poets write colored pictures to remind The reds and blues depict from flowing quills Give color to words across the pages And though artist words will never fulfill The colorful skies seen through the ages Bow to the artist who paints the red sky And for the poet's words , used to reply 4/12/14

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Date: 4/30/2014 10:32:00 AM
beautiful Frederic........SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2014 5:05:00 AM
Congrats on the win and thanks for sharing this colorful poem, frederic
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Date: 4/26/2014 1:33:00 AM
Congratulations.. Frederic... XOX..PD
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Date: 4/25/2014 11:52:00 PM
Wonderful poetry Frederic ,, And the last two lines amazing,, congrats on great win !
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:36:00 PM
Glad to see this one on the winners' list, where it deserves to be, Frederic. Congratulations.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/25/2014 10:10:00 PM
thank you Andrea, my poetic friend for your kind response...
Date: 4/25/2014 5:39:00 PM
Your couplet is outstanding! congrats on a nice win. BG
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/25/2014 5:47:00 PM
thank you Barbara for reading and for your kind response, yes the couplet was meant to thank the creator of all color
Date: 4/25/2014 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic on your winning poem in Charlotte's contest... Verlena
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/25/2014 5:48:00 PM
thank you Verlena for reading and your kind response
Date: 4/25/2014 5:06:00 PM
ah, you know how I enjoy your sonnets, they're usually winners with me, and this is surely one of your best...lovely use of colour, and you've portrayed the difficulty of recreating the world through mere words and pictures very well; those last two lines really clinched it as a winner - congrats! :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/25/2014 5:24:00 PM
thank you Charlotte for your contest and for your kindness
Date: 4/12/2014 8:08:00 PM
wonderful tribute this is to artist of pictures as well as artist of words. So you hitchhiked by never saw Iowa, huh? I think going along the main freeway you would miss so much. it's the little towns with the hills and parks and trees. that is where the beauty lies in almost every state.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/12/2014 9:09:00 PM
never traveled the free ways much, I remember traveling through wyoming when there was 1 person per sq mile, not to many small towns, but ever town was small...

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