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Descent

How can you be with me When I am with you but in your minds reel? Tell me, how I can be without your love when I am with you vividly but in my dream? I know where the peaks are, The creeks and the springs you go to, to fetch your water that flows without borders… And I see the mountains, Where you climb your doubts And find your place. Can you come down make your peace?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/3/2012 7:15:00 AM
nice write Aida,coming down to find peace
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Date: 9/29/2012 11:22:00 AM
Loved this one dear Aida! Hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 9/10/2012 1:46:00 PM
lovely write Aida,very much enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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Date: 9/10/2012 2:48:00 AM
Aida, very well written - beautiful images come to me through your poem. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2012 1:03:00 AM
beautiful imagery.... as if i were there thanks for sharing! - edwaard
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