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Derelict House

Children filling it with their running to and fro- the derelict house.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/20/2014 6:28:00 AM
Dear Vassilis, It would be difficult to keep a house in order with children "running to and fro." I enjoyed this write! Best wishes, carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2014 7:18:00 PM
OH YES, that will do it. It's nice seeing someone I have not yet visited. Let me see some more of your haiku
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Date: 6/13/2014 1:02:00 PM
Thus life commences Vassilis. Intriguing. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:42:00 AM
Lovely allegorical write, Vassillis
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