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Derail This Train of Pain

Set the world free from all this bull It is getting way too full Of things that don't need to be Part of our society Where did all this greed come from It needs to be all undone As people start to really care Not be greedy and will share With those who don't have a lot This would be a perfect start To fix what is going wrong And make this earth really strong The next step is really fine Start to act friendly and kind And not disrespect or judge Lets all gently start to nudge All this criticism off our lands Making it sunny and grand The last thing is real Never make somebody feel So ashamed of who they are It is going way to far With this prejudice and hate Please say it is not too late To repair all of the damage That's been done through all the rampage Of the hearts who do not see All this insensitivity Is making it really tough Let's all shout "It is enough" And stop this right in its tracks And move forward never back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/2/2014 7:41:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. Congrats on the win, robin
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Date: 5/1/2014 11:02:00 AM
ROBIN... Congratulations! Enjoying every entry, ENTERED in my "Any Poem #26" contest. Always & Forever *LINDA"
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Date: 2/27/2014 7:45:00 PM
This is one of your better ones because you are focused on humanity in general and making a great message of peace and love. Prejudice is still rampant in the world. Isn't it a crying shame?
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Date: 2/26/2014 10:00:00 PM
Another decent write. In your twenty-second line, just add another "o" to "to". You need the same homophone you have in your twenty-fourth line.
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