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I woke trembling on the threshold of dawn as dappled sunlight through my window shone Upon my primed canvas there had been drawn a masculine image with finely chiseled cheekbones What virile fantasy had I born while in flight for my hand to have created such a dashing face In stippled darkness of my dream-filled night, a handsome fantasy did I dare fondly embrace His eyes stared in wonder; tantamount to my own No angle shielded me from their deep penetration I held my breath, then released a soft guttural moan as his strong hand guided mine without hesitation Warm colors defined muscular features I painted His dark eyes were flecked with dustings of gold Flushed with desire, in a warm blush I was tainted when he faintly whispered, "To have and to hold" My palette was awash in shades of crimson. Soiled with streaks of scarlet were my hands and gown My brush strokes lingered on his full lips as I toiled imagining passion's kiss, in whose depth I would drown I could not bear the thought of tearing myself away On and on I painted where his gentle hands led until finally wearied from hunger, upon my bed I lay Unsated was a craving within me, a desire to be fed With eyes closed, I hoped to dream of him once more, of this man who had completely captivated my heart Come, handsome stranger. Find me as you did before I cannot endure life if we must live it in dreams apart

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Date: 10/30/2017 4:03:00 PM
SO beautiful , hot, rhyming words, sensous ................coherent and truly telling the words in your heart
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Date: 11/21/2017 11:32:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/28/2017 9:04:00 AM
Lin! Wow, this is hot and dreamy and very sensual. The rhymes are great and the read smooth yet stimulating. A great write.
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Date: 10/30/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thanks an awful lot for the compliments, James.
Date: 10/26/2017 4:18:00 PM
I first read this off the POTD e-mail which didn't credit the author. I knew in an instant it was yours Lin! A great poem, certainly worthy of POTD honors.
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:21:00 PM
Well, I'm truly amazed that you knew it was mine, but at the same time delighted! Thank you for the wonderful compliments, Dean.
Date: 10/26/2017 3:09:00 PM
Congrats Lin on POTD, this is a worthy write for sure!
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thank you very much for the kind comment, John.
Date: 10/26/2017 11:29:00 AM
Congrats Lin on the POTD : )
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thanks every so much, Tim.
Date: 10/26/2017 11:17:00 AM
OMG Lin! This poem really shines a light on your brilliant talent as a master poet! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD! This gem is going into my Faves! : )
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind words, Connie.
Date: 10/26/2017 5:58:00 AM
woohooo a very worthy POTD Lin and now I have to go back to the poem to see the pic that accompanies POTD hee hee:-) hugs jan xx (sorry Lin the comment jumped onto Mo's previous POTD:-(
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Date: 10/26/2017 6:17:00 AM
Thanks, I know you really enjoy this painting ;-)
Date: 10/26/2017 4:01:00 AM
- Sorry, a little late Lin ... but, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2017 5:28:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/25/2017 7:43:00 PM
A most beautiful write. Magnificent descriptions and rhymes. Love the metric beat and the picture perfect imagery. This poem has so much life to it. Amazing!
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Date: 10/26/2017 5:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/25/2017 4:58:00 PM
Lovely Poem...Beautiful dream... Congratulations on your POTD...
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Date: 10/25/2017 6:48:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Arturo.
Date: 10/25/2017 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on receiving POTD. :)
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Date: 10/25/2017 6:47:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Carol.
Date: 10/25/2017 1:51:00 PM
How beautiful. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 10/25/2017 2:01:00 PM
Thank you very kindly, Kudzal.
Date: 10/25/2017 12:25:00 PM
I can see why this one warrants congratulations. Outstanding writing!
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Date: 10/25/2017 2:01:00 PM
Your kind comments are very generous, Rick. Thanks ever so much.
Date: 10/25/2017 9:41:00 AM
Superlative! Superlative!!! Love it. Exquisite poetry; a fav. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/25/2017 2:00:00 PM
Thanks for such great kudos, Sunlite. I appreciate the kind thoughts.
Date: 10/25/2017 8:10:00 AM
Back for a that a girl, congratulations for POTD honors Lin...
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Date: 10/25/2017 2:00:00 PM
It's always a pleasure to see you visiting, Charlie. Your thoughts always cheer me.
Date: 10/25/2017 6:55:00 AM
Lovely! Back with congratulations :) A lovely day to you Lin! xomo
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Date: 10/25/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thanks for returning, Mo. I appreciate the visit and lovely day wishes to you, as well.
Date: 10/25/2017 6:15:00 AM
Lin, congrats on POTD, well deserved! John
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Date: 10/26/2017 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, John.
Date: 10/25/2017 4:41:00 AM
Gorgeous, Lin, and congrats on POTD! I have fallen in love a number of times in my dreams - a couple of times to the point of marriage and even falling in love with the woman's family, yet I have never seen any of them again. Whenever the dream is coming to an end we promise each other that we will search until we find each other again, because we know it's a dream, but I'm always so sad, cuz I know I won't.
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Date: 10/25/2017 1:58:00 PM
It's not silly to dream in such depth that it leaves you with a feeling of emptiness when you wake, but it DOES show the intensity of your emotions. Thanks you for liking this one so well, Greg.
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Date: 10/25/2017 4:42:00 AM
Silly, I know, but when you're dreaming, the dream is as real as reality is now, and I've fallen so deeply in that other world. Congrats again, my friend. <3
Date: 10/25/2017 3:57:00 AM
Congrats my friend on POTD!!!...excellent passionate write...god bless...*WW*
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Date: 10/25/2017 1:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, WW.
Date: 10/23/2017 6:03:00 PM
Triple wowsa! If I ate chocolate as rich as this PO I'd die from a bliss overdose after the first bite! ~ john
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Date: 10/23/2017 7:22:00 PM
Thanks so very much, John.
Date: 10/23/2017 4:40:00 PM
A very passionate beautiful poem, I always love the imagery and flow of your writes!
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Date: 10/23/2017 5:24:00 PM
Thank you very much for the compliments, Arthur.
Date: 10/23/2017 2:27:00 PM
Now that's my kind of dream...spectacular ...a fav
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Date: 10/23/2017 2:29:00 PM
I'm going to agree with you, completely, Tim. Thanks ever so much.
Date: 10/23/2017 1:56:00 PM
PHWARRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lIN THIS IS EXCEPTIONAL. Romance and passion in every line and I could live with that picture ( he reminds me of an actor but i can't think of his name) am adding this to my faves so i can enjoy it again and again and again!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2017 2:10:00 PM
lol Jan. The intensity of his stare got to you too, didn't it? Thanks for the kudos and the fav. I'm with you on looking at that face for quite some time.
Date: 10/23/2017 12:49:00 PM
Romantic old style Ms. Lin, wonderfully written...
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Date: 10/23/2017 2:08:00 PM
"Romantic old style" makes for the best love poems, don't they Charlie? Thanks so much for your sweet comments.
Date: 10/23/2017 11:32:00 AM
Such a beautiful and passionate dream, Lin; unfortunately my dreams usually end up being about work... Great poem! John
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2017 2:07:00 PM
Perhaps a glass of wine before you retire will mellow your dreams, John. Thanks for the kind remarks. They're appreciated.
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